~ Afternoon Delight ~
by eo
Written for J M Dragon’s “Dragon Jules Storybook Challenge” August 2004


This story is about love.
It may or may not contain some suggestive sexual situations - if you are under the age of 18 please do not read this story.
No violence or bad language just lovin’.

The Song
Afternoon Delight
Gonna find my baby, gonna hold her tight
gonna grab some afternoon delight.
My motto's always been; when it's right, it's right.
Why wait until the middle of a cold dark night.
When everything's a little clearer in the light of day.
And you know the night is always gonna be there any way.
Sky rockets in flight. Afternoon delight. Afternoon delight.
Thinkin' of you's workin' up my appetite
looking forward to a little afternoon delight.
Rubbin' sticks and stones together makes the sparks ingite
and the thought of rubbin' you is getting so exciting.
Sky rockets in flight. Afternoon delight. Afternoon delight.
Started out this morning feeling so polite
I always though a fish could not be caught who wouldn't bite
But you've got some bait a waitin' and I think I might try nibbling
a little afternoon delight.
Sky rockets in flight. Afternoon delight. Afternoon delight.
Please be waiting for me baby when I come around.
We could make a lot of lovin' 'for the sun goes down.
Sky rockets in flight. Afternoon delight. Afternoon delight.

The Story

Afternoon Delight

Karley Hampton stretched out on her comfortable couch and threw a light blanket over her body even though the temperature was in the high seventies. The night before had been particularly restless, the morning frustrating and finally exhaustion had caught up with her. Slowly she closed her eyelids as her mind began to waft in and out of consciousness with visions of cold running water lapping in her darkened sight.

Ding dong, ding dong, the annoying door chime screamed into the quiet room.

“Shit!” Karley exclaimed as her eyes widened. “Who the hell is that?” She tried to get up only to find her feet entangled in the blanket. Falling back on the couch with a thud she called out loudly, “I’m coming!” then softly grumbled, “this better not be some neighborhood kids selling cookies or candy or wrapping paper!”

Flinging the door open she said, “Yeah.” Only to be surprised to see a little old white haired main standing there with a bouquet of flowers almost as big as he was.

“Here you go,” he said foisting them towards Karley.

Karley was so shocked that she couldn’t eek out a word before the man turned and began departing. “Wait, let me get you something,” she finally blurted out. But, the man apparently didn’t hear her as he continued without acknowledging her.

She softly closed the door holding the bouquet close to her while inhaling in their fragrance. Stopping she took the card from the middle of the flowers, opened it and read the note. Surrender was all that was written there. Smiling before she broke out in laughter she walked into the kitchen and placed the vase down on the white tile counter. “You are such a charmer Maddy and subtle too.”

A smile still graced her face as she picked up the phone and dialed a familiar number. “Hey, guess what just arrived on my doorstep?”

“Hmm is it bigger than a breadbox?”


“Is it in the kitchen now?”


“Ah, then it must be that television you wanted in there.” It was all Madeline Thomas could do to not laugh.

“Nooooo, silly, it isn’t a TV. Guess if you don’t know then I must have a secret admirer.”

Finally Maddy laughed heartily, “Are you pleased?”

“Well, my dear it depends on what this message means…surrender, just what does that entail?”

“Good question, but one which I will have to answer later.”

“Oh, you’re not alone,” Karley said innocently.

“Not at the moment.” Maddy knew what was coming but played along.

“Guess this wouldn’t be a good time to tell you I am nekkid and needy and want you to satisfy my every desire.” Her voice took on a predatory tone as she let out a slight growl.

Maddy knew the game they had played it many time before when her colleagues were in her office. She took a big gulp of air as she felt, just as she had every other time, her body becoming aroused. “No it wouldn’t.”

“But, I can try, right?”

“Most definitely…give it your best shot.”

“You mean give you my best shot don’t you?”

“Ah uh.”

“Lover, if I remember correctly I gave you several of my best shots already this morning. Have you forgotten so soon?” Karley loved playing this game with her lover.

“Did you now…hmm, I don’t really remember. Can you refresh my mind, please.” Maddy looked up at her waiting PA who held papers out to be signed. Pressing the mute button she said, “I’ll sing them latter, Patty, will you close the door when you leave?”

The dutiful woman placed the papers on the desk and exited the room quietly closing the door behind her. Maddy chucked slightly before pressing the button.

Karley always wished she were a fly on the wall in the office when she teased the wonderful woman on the other end of the phone line. “Well, if I remember correctly you woke me up rather early…did you know I had laid there awake all night hoping you would wake up? I was so horny and wet and watching you sleep turned me on even more. Do you remember how dripping wet I was when you touched me?”

“Really, I didn’t notice,” Maddy said matter-of-factly all the while she could feel the swelling increase and the moisture overflow.

“You didn’t, hmm, that is strange ‘cause I am certain you remarked that you were glad you were thirsty.” Karley could feel herself becoming aroused as she spoke it had been a glorious start to the day until Maddy realized how late she was then everything was put on hold. “After you left all I could do was think of you touching me. I need satisfaction and I don’t want it to be solitarily…hmm, I know you can talk me through it.”

Maddy listened to her lover’s voice and she felt such love for the woman who had rescued not only her heart but her soul too. She hated to tear herself away earlier; had it been anyone other than the company’s prime client she would still be there in her lover’s arms. The thought of holding Maddy’s naked body and exploring every nook and cranny was way too much for her to bear. Clearing her throat Maddy spoke softly into the receiver, “what are you doing say in about thirty minutes?”

“What did you have in mind, Lover?”

“You, me naked under, over and on top of the sheets.”

“Oh, Baby, are you suggesting a nooner?” Karley said with a giggle.

“Oh, no Darlin’ something much more…much, much more.”

”You don’t mean…are you serious, Karley?”

“Yep, and afternoon to remember…are you up for it?”

“Hell, yes! An afternoon delight with my favorite girl I can’t think of anything more wonderful. Hurry Lover I’ll be waiting for you.”

Maddy’s body was on fire she needed to get home she required relief! “Yep, when it’s right it’s right.”

The drive home was impossible for Maddy. An accident on the main highway caused a jam up of traffic on the road she took. Thrumming her fingers on the steering wheel she fantasized about Karley and the sparks they would ignite as their bodies rubbed together. “Yep, sky rockets in the day time.” Her body was on fire and so tightly wound that she was certain the moment she looked at Maddy she would explode. Pulling out her cell she pressed one for speed dial.

Karley, lying in their bed naked rolled over and picked up when the phone rang. “Hey, what’s takin’ so long?”

“Sorry Darlin’, traffic is at a stand still I’ll be there soon I promise.”

“Do you know how much I love you and need you here right now?”

“I know, Babe, I can feel you in my arms all warm and ready for me. I can’t wait to make love to you all afternoon long.” Maddy’s voice was low and sultry.

“Hmm, I’m closing my eyes and can feel you right here nibbling on my ear and running your hands up and down my body.”

Maddy squirmed and squeezed her legs tighter together. “Baby, if you keep talking like that I’m going to come right here and now.”

“Oh no, you can’t do that I want to satisfy all of you right here in our bed not over the phone. Try and think of something cold like snow or ice or who’s that woman in your office with the hots for you?” Karley laughed heartily, “You know the one with the nose hairs and unibrow?”


“Yep, that’s the one.”

 Maddy laughed. “Well, that did it! Completely cooled me down…thanks!”

“Anytime, Lover. Hurry home I’m waiting for you.”

“Soon. The traffic is starting to move. I love you, Karley.”

“I love you too.”

When the opportunity came Maddy seized it and took a side street and navigated her car down narrow streets avoiding the back up. She needed to get home. She needed to take her lover who was waiting for her in her arms and make lots of lovin’ before the sun went down.

Her hand shook as she reached for the brass doorknob; the anticipation was tremendous. Pushing open the heavy oak door, she stepped inside her feet resting on the flagstone of the entry floor. A smile crossed her face when she saw the rose petals strewn on the dark surface. Her eyes traveled along the carpet towards the stairs noting the red petals beckoning her to follow them. And, she did. With each rose petal an article of clothing was deposited until she reached the door to their bedroom.

“Karley,” she cooed, “I’m home.” Slowly she opened their bedroom door finding the room illuminated by the flicking light of candles. Instantly she saw her beautiful lover lying on their bed with the sheet pulled up covering her body except for one creamy white breast exposed; the nipple taut, seemingly straining to be released from its confines. “Now, that is a wonderful sight to behold.”

Crooking her finger, Karley waggled it in Maddy’s direction. “I’ve been waiting for you Lover. Come on over here I have something to give you.”

“Hmm, you do?” Maddy purred as she made her way towards the bed. Pulling back the covers she saw the beautiful body she had been craving all morning. Crawling along side Karley, Maddy encircled the woman with her arm and held her tight. “I want you…all of you…right now.”

In no time hot, sweaty bodies were so close that there was no telling one from the other. Sliding together in perfect harmony, sparks began to ignite their passion sending an array of colors soaring into the darkened room lighting it in the warm glow of love.

Mouths nibbled on flesh, sucked in taut nipples and feasted on soft tissue eagerly wanting only to satisfy and delight. Tongues greedily searched out the abundant moistness waiting to be lapped up before beginning to lick and tease tense swollen nubs waiting for release. Fingers traced moist crevices before delving into the deepest recesses rubbing and stroking until a fevered pitch was reached. Each woman was straining against the other’s fingers wanting and needing to let go of the pent up passion the other induced. As if on cue fingers found the special spot and began moving in slow circles massaging, excitement building until release needed to happen.

Screams of delight could be heard throughout the house when each woman came in an explosion of ecstasy. Falling back on the bed, still clutching each other, they lay motionless, their breathing rapid and heavy. Finally a sense of delight and extreme happiness filled their minds and bodies. Whispered words of love filled the candlelit room as Karley and Maddy clung to one another.

Turning over and facing her lover, Maddy whispered, “We should do this more often.”

“I agree,” Karley sighed. “To think of all the afternoons we have wasted.”

“This is definitely something I could get used to…want to have lunch with me every day like this?”

Karley laughed, “You mean dining on each other instead of food…what a wonderful diet! Count me in!” she exclaimed with delight lacing her voice.

A look of desire crossed Maddy’s face as her long fingers traced over her lover’s face. “More…I need more of you.”

Lips touched then pressed hard against one another before opening greedily taking in the taste of their previous love making. Soon sparks were igniting once again rockets began to take flight as their afternoon delight continued long into the day making the most of the light of day.

The End

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